Im 15 and practicing with writing, please let me know what you think of this short story?
Question: Creatures
The quiet light of the moon shining above in all its beauty, a goddess among its stars envious. There was no sound except the rustling of the grass gold against the breeze of the night serene.
Answer: I conclude a little, but from what I can say its pretty good. However, do not describe things. You should also start with a gripping scene NEVER attempt a description. You need to hook the reader, the landscape can be set up later.







